Monday 25 February 2019

Anonymous feedback from Literotica

I still get some anonymous feedback once in a while -- I just hope they check out this blog for the answers.

This message contains feedback for: SirSinn
About the submission: The Eros Project Ch. 01
This feedback was sent by: Anonymous

Title:

Character recognition

Comments:

Is it Professor Nicholson? Or Professor Allison? Or perhaps Professor Nicholson-Allison?
Get a grip on your characters!

Yeah, I slipped up and admitted as much in the comments on the story when someone else pointed it out. It should be Professor Nicholson.

This message contains feedback for: SirSinn
About the submission: The Eros Project Ch. 03
This feedback was sent by: Anonymous

Title:

Needs more players

Comments:

And a little force. 

Some new players will appear in Chapter 5 but no, no force.

6 comments:

  1. I say YES to new players, NO to force! And I would not say no to a daisy chain with the orgy.

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  2. Glad to see you back man.
    Have you considered a Trailer Park chapter focused on Shere, her sister and their father?

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    Replies
    1. The Trailer Park stories are one-off, stand alone. No plans to revisit the characters in them.

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  3. Really hot stories. I like this "let's not be too serious about this, we just want incest and porn scenes" style in your stories. More "realistic" stories have a place in my heart but sometimes you just want to have fun and not care about details and what would really happen.

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