Replies to comments on Optocynic 5000

There's been a bunch of comments on the Optocynic 5000 story, some positive, some not, so rather than try and address them all there, I've copied them here so I can reply individually.

Anonymous 03/10/16

I always wished that the original story got a continuation but it never happened, so I'm really pleased & entertained by yours. Sure it differs from that one but not in a bad way, new author new approach & style. I do hope you continue your however.

Thanks -- I will be continuing this.

grayge37 03/10/16
Five Stars *****

This was hot in spite of it moving at a fast pace and it's brevity.
Sequel chapter (s) are a MUST!

I have just discovered your stories and now plan to read some or all of them.

It's as brief as the original and deliberately so -- hope you like my other stuff.

dutch513nels 03/10/16
HOT !

That was VERY GOOD . Gave it a 5 . Made my favorite page .. Hope you do more with this . Sister? Sister, Mother . Maybe a hot three way ? Hell of a job Thank You .

Oh yes, sister will be involved and then a threesome. There's nothing clever about this series for me -- it's just pretty predictable porn.

datass9001 03/10/16
Excellent continuation of a great series

I do think the addition of some kind of magical/mystical power was necessary to Optocynic's original series, but it was also fun that it was absent too. I'm glad you're continuing that series. Keep up the great work!

Thanks -- I plan to keep the mystical side of things very light and just sort of hinted at.

Anonymous 03/10/16

Original story by optocynic
https://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=686845&page=submissions

That's the one.

Anonymous 03/10/16

There were unfinished part 5 of the original story. I don't know if SirSinn plan to finish it. Maybe he join this new story with old one (orgy with Dan and his mom)???

There were more that 7 yrs from the original story were posted. I was expected that anybody could write continuation/spin offs... Thank you...

No, no plans to directly continue the original story -- I just wanted to use the same set up with my own characters.

Anonymous 03/10/16
Sister

Sister next please then both.

As I mentioned above, the sister will be involved.

Anonymous 03/10/16

Great story! Sister next, then mom and sister in a threeway

See above.

BILLBAD 03/10/16
my first story

original story is the one of first storries i read on this site and hooked me to this site.good tribute to story.keep continue
I dont read big tits and big dicks stories but i made an exception for u

Thanks for making an exception.

Averygoodlay 03/11/16
Not bad

Except for the big cock and tits that so many think they need for a story also the anal ruined the whole thing

Seriously? Did you not read the disclaimer at the start which said the story would be big tits, big dick and anal so don't complain about it in the comments? Jesus!

doug_nought 03/11/16
Great story!

I always was cold towards the original when it essentially turned into a mom-a-slut-lets-gangbang her. This is a great story though, I just wished you had paced it a bit more. The anal could have waited to the next chapter probably. Oh well, 5 stars from me.

Deliberately short and sweet, just like the original.

Anonymous 03/11/16
What language is this?

"Eeehhhhhhh,aaaarrrrrrgggg, aaaaaahhhhheee, eeeeerrrrrrggggg" etc. Not a bad story but it was too rushed and the anal at the end spoiled it.

Again, the disclaimer told you what to expect. As to the "Eeehhhhhhh,aaaarrrrrrgggg, aaaaaahhhhheee, eeeeerrrrrrggggg" -- each to their own.

Anonymous 03/11/16
Keep writing

Could use a little more detail

Thanks.

horny2doit 03/11/16

WOW - a wonderful story - Mom and hung son is so HOT !! The dialogue was pretty good but in the next chapter; can you let it flow with alittle more intimate conversation between Mom and son ?? Of course he really needs to screw her long and hard now that they have agreed this is not a one time thing. His comments have unlocked her real sexiness and how to fill the void of her getting sex. Thank you .......

If you're after character and plot and intimacy, try my "Day By Day" story -- this is just an exercise in smut.

Anonymous 03/11/16

I really liked the story, but you need to edit it a little better, there were places that didn't make sense, and you had to figure out what you meant!

I'll admit I rushed it a little -- will try and catch the edits next time.

Anonymous 03/12/16
Hmmmm!!!

Plagiarize much??? You tried to hide it but you plagiarized another story on here involving son,mom and a new camera.

Plagiarize? How? By acknowledging the source material? By incorporating the original author's name in the title? By explicitly using his characters as an introdutory device? I took optocynic's story as the basis for my own -- I have not copied his tale and claimed it as my work.

People telling me my writing is crap is one thing -- claiming I've stolen someone else's work as my own annoys me.

Anonymous 03/12/16
Meh

You were trying too hard, and that "fuck you if you don't like it" at the start just ruined it from the beginning.

Perhaps realise that being LESS specific about things makes MUCH more people interested in your story.

This is a fantasy story website (kinda the point in the incest/taboo category), stop writing story to just suit yourself and write them to suit everyone.
If you're doing it for just you, then print it off your computer and jack off in your own bed and leave us to a fantasy.

Useless writer, useless story, huge waste of time, didn't even get me wet.

The disclaimer at the start tells you what to expect -- if you read it and don't like it, that's up to you. As to "stop writing story to just suit yourself and write them to suit everyone" well that's clearly impossible because this story didn't work for you but others (see above) have loved it and given it 5 stars. If I changed it to suit you, it wouldn't have suited the others.