Comments on Family Business chapter 2

Had plenty of comments on my continuation of Leon22reload's "Family Business" story and find it's easier to reply here.

Anonymous 03/22/16
Keep It Up!

No pun intended. ;-) Definitely keep the story line going. You have the makings of a good series here and I look forward to additional chapters.

Yep, plenty more to come.

Anonymous 03/22/16
Make it a series

We need another series like the Trophy Wives Club to stop getting all romantic about incest! It needs to be about fun and debauchery, not love and procreation. Go for it!

Of course it'll be a series! If you just want nasty family sex, try my "Optocynic 5000" series.

RapidResponder 03/22/16
Solid

Well-written and very readable. I enjoyed it and would be happy to see you continue! ****

Glad you liked it -- will definitely be continued.

billyjim55 03/22/16
GREAT JOB

You picked up thee story just fine, Keep it going.ty/bill

Thank you!

Anonymous 03/22/16
Keep it going!

I love your stories! This one is a brilliant addition to your portfolio. Keep it coming!

Will do!

Anonymous 03/22/16
More, please!

Thank you for continuing this story. Just where are you going to take these massive cocks and breasts?

Stay tuned to find out!

Anonymous 03/23/16
Series

Agree with previous poster. Make it a series. Incest should be fun and nasty. Honestly how many marry their sister? But fuck their sister? A lot more than "experts" tell us. Keep it going.

Again -- why wouldn't I make this a series?

Anonymous 03/23/16
Loved it

All your stories are great and this one is no exception. I can't wait to see what happens next.

Thank you!

Anonymous 03/23/16
Fantastic continuity!

I normally don't care for the huge tit/huge cock scene; however, you did such a terrific job of taking the original story to new heights that I'll be looking forward to your continuing efforts in this same vein. You melded your efforts so well that one wouldn't know of the author change unless informed. Really well done!

Thanks -- I hoped to match Leon's original.

rightbank 03/23/16
Might as well make it a series

you've already established at least three other possible combinations before you start blending the families.

Of course it'll be a series! Why would anyone doubt that?

D_Kacey 03/23/16
Couldn't imagine a better author to take the helm

Fantastic! Like the title says, I couldn't imagine a better author to take the helm from Leon22reloaded. Look forward to hopefully the rest of this series from you.

Thanks -- plenty more to come like I said.

jackal_man 03/23/16
Blast from the past!

Leon22(Reloaded)'s stories from a couple years ago are among my favorite, re-readable entries. The pairings, the potential, the overall tone--I loved them, and were always on my mind whenever I'd check Literotica for updates. When I saw this story pop up on the feed, I was excited and happy to see it continue. I had always imagined what direction the story would go in with the setup from chapter 1, and was curious to see where you'd take it.

While it seems the quality will definitely continue (and capture the spirit of Leon's works), I was a slightly (very slightly) thrown off to see the main pairing be Danny and Alicia again. I loved their pairing in chapter 1 and reread it often--and more is always nice--but after a long wait, part of me was expecting something new.

With that in mind, I thought you did a fantastic job of planting seeds for next chapters, all the while introducing a new character in Tiffany. The burgeoning porn business the brothers are creating will work well with all the hot moms, but it's also nice that younger female characters aren't getting neglected. It also expands options to include both mother/son scenes and brother/sister scenes (in addition to the other pairings being alluded to, of course).

Looking forward to future installments, and to seeing when the brothers finally get with their own mom. Also looking forward to some MMF and MFF threesomes if you ever get around to it!

Curious: did Leon give you the go ahead to continue his other series as well, or just this one?

Thanks -- I know what you mean about using Danny and Alicia again but it would have been too soon to bring in the others just yet. Like you said this was me planting seeds for what's to come, introducing Tiffany (whose appearance was based on Leon's ideas) and building up to involving the other characters in later chapters.



Leon did give me permission to continue his other stories but for now I'm just concentrating on this one.

BH54 03/23/16
Good story to take over

I can hardly wait for all the combinations of the listed characters. Don't forget to make sure that Dad gets caught by the FBI or better yet some biker group.

LOL! No plans for Mr Wright's reintroduction/final fate just yet!

Anonymous 03/24/16
Regarding the calls to make a series

Why go to this trouble and set up so much if it's not a series? The first person we meet, Lisa, still hasn't gotten fucked -- and of there was one character in this who really needs a good fucking it's Lisa. However, in her current frame of mind, I'm not sure she's in any state to really be consenting, so that's why I'm presuming that's being held off for another chapter. Calm her down until she's able to think clearly -- and then fuck her brains out.

Then there's Nicole. She's just waiting for the guys to come (cum?) by, hopefully adding Cassie into the mix. Given what they'd done, why would Danny keep Alicia all to himself?

Not a series? This is ready made for a series, seemingly leading to all the mothers and sisters starring in videos. Hell, Lisa becoming the star of the video series seems to be the natural way out of her financial worries.

The one thing I kinda hope happens is that when Nealson comes back from his business trip he's not the cliche where every married man is an idiot who doesn't know what's going on, especially given Cassie hoping her father doesn't get hurt. Yeah, there are a lot of father/daughter stories, but all too often in stories like this, having him join in would be out of the norm.

Thanks -- I've never had so many calls to make a story a series even though it's obviously set up to be a series!

As to Mr Nealson coming back -- we'll have to see what happens there.

Thanks for all the comments!