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About the submission: The Eros Project Ch. 01
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Title:
Character recognition
Comments:
Is it Professor Nicholson? Or Professor Allison? Or perhaps Professor Nicholson-Allison?
Get a grip on your characters!
Yeah, I slipped up and admitted as much in the comments on the story when someone else pointed it out. It should be Professor Nicholson.
This message contains feedback for: SirSinn
About the submission: The Eros Project Ch. 03
This feedback was sent by: Anonymous
Title:
Needs more players
Comments:
And a little force.
Some new players will appear in Chapter 5 but no, no force.
I say YES to new players, NO to force! And I would not say no to a daisy chain with the orgy.
ReplyDeleteSort of new players in Chapter 5.
DeleteGlad to see you back man.
ReplyDeleteHave you considered a Trailer Park chapter focused on Shere, her sister and their father?
The Trailer Park stories are one-off, stand alone. No plans to revisit the characters in them.
DeleteReally hot stories. I like this "let's not be too serious about this, we just want incest and porn scenes" style in your stories. More "realistic" stories have a place in my heart but sometimes you just want to have fun and not care about details and what would really happen.
ReplyDeleteThanks -- I totally agree.
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