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About the submission: The Eros Project Ch. 01
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Title:
Character recognition
Comments:
Is it Professor Nicholson? Or Professor Allison? Or perhaps Professor Nicholson-Allison?
Get a grip on your characters!
Yeah, I slipped up and admitted as much in the comments on the story when someone else pointed it out. It should be Professor Nicholson.
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About the submission: The Eros Project Ch. 03
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Title:
Needs more players
Comments:
And a little force.
Some new players will appear in Chapter 5 but no, no force.