Reaction to the last chapter of Alex in Pornoland

Following on from my post a moment ago, it's clear what you think of the last chapter of Alex. Man, some people don't like surprises.

If you're reading this chances are you've come from Literotica and you've probably read the end of my story Alex in Pornoland. If you haven't and you plan to, then here's a picture - - beyond that there's a jump break and under that are spoilers so if you don't want to know the end of the story, don't click on the break.

Spoilers after the break.



Okay, so Alex in Pornoland finished with the main character, Alex, discovering too late he'd been tricked into leaving Pornoland and ending up back in the real world. When he got back, he found a mirror had been sent to him that allows him to return to Pornoland and live out his dream.

AiP came about because a reader wrote and said he wanted something that wasn't as full-on as my other stuff - - he wanted a little reluctance and persuasion before the sex. While he referred to the women as being reticent, I twisted it and turned it into Alex simply because I already had the Alex in Pornoland title in my head, a play of course on Alice in Wonderland. Pretty early on, probably around chapter 3 or 4, I decided I wanted to do something with the title to Alice's sequel, Through the Looking Glass. But for Alex to go Through the Pornoglass, he had to return to the real world, which meant him leaving at the end of this story.

That - - to put it mildly - - has obviously pissed off a lot of readers as you can see from the first few comments that chapter 7's received on Lit:

FantasticJack
The end of the beginning

This...this can't be the end! You've got yourself one hell of a setup for Alex Returns to Pornoland. It would be a crime to not to continue, or at least begin a whole new story. Please let this just be a setup!

Yes, it's a set-up.

Anonymous
More Hints

I enjoyed it but the man in black as the villain was a bit left-field. I would have enjoyed some hints in previous chapters showing us why the New World was in fact real.

Someone enjoyed it, at least.

Anonymous
DON'T END IT HERE

You can not end it right her that is just a horrible way to end a story , you need to continue this , take Alex back into the fantasy world and keep the story going , I will be honest this is the only story of yours I liked and if it ends well you may lose a lot of readers who knows , all I know is this is your best work and I hope you reconsider and keep the story going , there is so much more you could do with it especially with what the man in black said about not wanting competition and being from the real world

I'm glad you like it, I'm sorry you didn't like my other stuff, but yes, this is going to continue and the man in black will be addressed in the sequel.

SyrustheVirus

if this was the end than you are a fucking douche.

And as it isn't the end, I'm not a fucking douche.

Anonymous

Nooooo
I'm with the masses you can't just leave it there, I hope with all the comments for more you will indeed write more.

The intention was always to have a sequel, which is why the magic mirror appeared at the end.

Anonymous
Completely useless story...

That went absolutely no-where. You had the chance to make a great thing here, and you spent that chance making a 7-chapter waste of time. Congratulations.

I made a seven chapter tease with a promise of more to come. If that's not what you're after then it's unfortunate for you, but it wasn't a waste of my time.

Anonymous
Do not do it.

Do not stop here. This is a set-up for a great story. You could even ad some action and sense it is a alternate universe story, you could get really crazy.

Again, it is a setup and there will be more.

Rolly_J_McGee
After all that buildup... we get nothing.

Other than a few brief hand-jobs and blow jobs, there wasn't any actual sex, was there? Just teasing and talk of the sex Alex could've been having. Sure there was that disappointingly short girl-on-girl "scene" near the end but that was a poor consolation prize for all your readers.

The least you could have done is drop him right back in the studio for his threesome after stepping through the mirror! Call it an epilogue if it makes you feel better about it...

All that buildup and then... nothing.

The build up was what I was going for - - as I said above, this was a tease story.

Anonymous
No...Hell No

Dude all that build up for this i swear please please please make more you made 7 chapters for this ending...come on i thought you were better than this at least make 1 more chapter to wrap it up with includes alex fucking the shit out of his mom and sister

Not sure how long the sequel will be, but probably 7 chapters just to mirror this one. And with the events of the last chapter, he will be banging his mom and sister!

Anonymous
Fucking troll

Suck my balls troll!!

LOL! No, I don't think I will.

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There's a fine line between giving the audience what they want and leaving them wanting more as you can see from the comments the story's received - - I guessed people wouldn't be happy with the ending but fuck it, I needed that ending in order to write the sequel.

So thanks for taking the time to comment (except, maybe, the "Suck my balls troll!!" comment) and I'm sorry many of you didn't like the ending - - I'm expecting to get kicked in the nuts by the rating on this one - - but the sequel should be starting soon.